Question

假如你是新華中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，在最近舉行的市高中生英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)大賽中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社邀請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇稿件，介紹你練習(xí)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。稿件內(nèi)容如下：
1．樹(shù)立自信，克服羞怯心理；
2．多參加英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)；
3．多看英語(yǔ)新聞（如CCTV-9）
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                 
                                                                            

Answer 1

不唯一
I'm Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School. Now I'd like to share my experience in practicing oral Enghsh.
Firstly, I'm always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of makding mistakes which may embarrass me. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends. By talking with them, my oral English has improved a lot. Finally, some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the prograss in my speaking ability. Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation.
Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes. Our hard work will finally be rewarded.

試題分析：寫(xiě)作是一個(gè)人英語(yǔ)綜合水平的體現(xiàn)。英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平的高低包含的要素很多,而句子構(gòu)造方式是非常重要的要素。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思。考生應(yīng)明白高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中牢牢記住以下口訣：“先讀提示，要點(diǎn)與格式要弄清；時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)要當(dāng)心，前后呼應(yīng)要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫(xiě)好細(xì)檢查，點(diǎn)滴小錯(cuò)別忽視”。學(xué)生在明確目的和掌握要領(lǐng)后，要嚴(yán)格按照規(guī)定的時(shí)間去完成作文。