Question

近幾年，全球變暖越來(lái)越受到關(guān)注，越來(lái)越多的人為組織全球變暖做出貢獻(xiàn)，因此一種新的生活方式誕生了——低碳生活。請(qǐng)就Low Carbon Life寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，要求涵蓋以下要點(diǎn)：
1. 不需要用電和水的時(shí)候，記得把它們關(guān)掉。
2. 外出時(shí)，盡可能步行、騎自行車(chē)或乘坐公共交通工具。
3. 請(qǐng)使用節(jié)能產(chǎn)品。
字?jǐn)?shù)：100-110
                                                                              

Answer 1

In recent years, the attention to global warming has been increasing. More and more people make contributions to prevent it from going worse. At the same time, a new low-carbon lifestyle emerges.
What can we do to achieve low carbon? First, remember to turn off lights and water taps when you do not use them. Second, when going out, take public transports, ride a bike or walk as much as possible to reduce carbon emission. Third, use the energy-saving products.
Besides of these, there are many other ways we can employ to live a low carbon life. If everyone maintains/ adheres to the lifestyle, it will make a huge change to the current situation and our home will become much more beautiful.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。