Question

假定你在參加一場英語辯論賽，你是正方辯手，試用英語簡要地表明自己的觀點。

主題	Shall a senior school student take a part-time job in holidays?
觀點	1. 高中生重視功課，面對社會所知甚少。
	2．假期做a part-time job是很好的社會實踐。
	3. 假期是最好的補償時間。
	3．通過書本學到的東西不如通過經(jīng)驗學到的東西有效。
	4．通過社會實踐，我們可以在知識和能力兩個方面取得進步。
	5．假期做a part-time job的報酬對家里或多或少有些幫助。
結論	高中生……

注意：（社會實踐：social practice; 社會：society ; 知識：knowledge ）
1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、開頭已為你寫好。
Dear friends,
Here are my points .
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Answer 1

Dear friends,
Here are my points. We students of today paid much attention to our lessons and knew little of society though it’s not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What is learned in books can’t have the same (deep) effect on us as what is learned through experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides, taking a part-time job, we may get paid(be paid) more or less to help our families. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible, of course.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。