Question

假如你班將舉行一次英語(yǔ)班會(huì),主題為“How to be strong and healthy”。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。

存在問(wèn)題	部分中學(xué)生身體素質(zhì)差
解決方法	1. 充足的睡眠 2. 加強(qiáng)鍛煉,增加戶外活動(dòng) 3. 定時(shí)吃飯,少吃零食 4. 養(yǎng)成講衛(wèi)生的習(xí)慣

注意：1。字?jǐn)?shù)120左右；
2.生詞：零食：non-staple food   衛(wèi)生：hygiene
3.開(kāi)頭已給出.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dear friends,

Answer 1

Dear friends,
We have found out the fact that some middle school students are not kept in good health. But what should we do to improve our physical condition?
First of all, you should get enough sleep. You'd better go to bed and get up regularly. Don't stay up. Secondly, you should take more exercise and do more outdoor activities to strengthen your body. Thirdly, remember to have three meals regularly and eat less non-staple food, which will do good to you. Finally, you'd better form the habit of paying due attention to hygiene.

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫(xiě)作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。