Question

高三學(xué)生面臨著沉重的學(xué)習(xí)壓力，很多學(xué)生利用課間十分鐘的休息時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí),實(shí)際上沒有什么效果。假如你是新華中學(xué)高三年級(jí)的學(xué)生李立，就此現(xiàn)象給中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)寫封信，發(fā)表自己的看法。信的內(nèi)容須包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1．十分鐘的課間休息很有必要（說(shuō)明理由）； 2．你是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。
注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右； 2、信的開頭已經(jīng)給出（不計(jì)入總數(shù)）。
Dear Editor,
I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. ________________________
Sincerely yours
Li li

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. As is known to all, senior 3 students are suffering heavy pressure of study. As a result, many students are trying to spare every minute to study, even during the ten-minute break between classes.
In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary, which makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. The ten-minute break is meant for us to relax and prepare for the next class. Only by doing so can we have more energy to study effectively in class.
My ten-minute break is always pleasing as well as relaxing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take walk a outside. Therefore, I always feel energetic and listen attentively in class.
Sincerely yours
Li li

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點(diǎn)評(píng)：書面表達(dá)是最能體現(xiàn)一個(gè)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力和英語(yǔ)思維理解的題目，對(duì)于作文的提高需要學(xué)生平時(shí)在練習(xí)過程中，對(duì)于寫錯(cuò)或是不知道表達(dá)的一定要多問老師，同時(shí)還應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過程中寫的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。