Question

你經(jīng)常與父母交流嗎？調查顯示大部分中學生與父母交流正常，但也有少數(shù)中學生不能與父母進行有效溝通。某英文雜志就此問題向中學生征稿。請你根據(jù)以下要求寫一篇100-120個詞的英文稿件：
1．簡述調查的結果；
2．闡述與父母交流的重要性；
3．說說你已有的做法或接下來的打算。
注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。
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Answer 1

One possible version:
A recent survey shows most students often communicate with their parents, but there are still some who think it embarrassing to share their ideas with them.
Actually everyone should attach importance to family communication. It can strengthen the bond of the whole family and bridge the gap between children and parents. Besides, sharing your personal problems and emotions will greatly help reduce the pressure on you and build up your confidence.
As for my family, we have a special dinner together every Saturday evening, over which everyone present takes turns to share one problem while the others try to suggest solutions. In this way the whole family can enjoy every single bit of life. I think my family will stick to the tradition forever.   

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