Question

你的英國朋友Peter正在做一個(gè)課題：收集世界各地慶祝生日的方式。他請(qǐng)你介紹中國學(xué)生(teenagers)過生日的方式。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封回信。
一、通常方式
1．父母給孩子過生日，舉行家庭或飯店聚餐；或壽星自己組織一個(gè)生日聚會(huì)，邀請(qǐng)朋友吃飯聊天，唱歌等；生日蛋糕是不可缺少的。
2．親屬、朋友給壽星送生日禮物，并向他／她祝福。
二、簡單地說說你認(rèn)為更有意義的慶祝方式并說明你的理由。
注意： 字?jǐn)?shù)120左右；信的開頭已給出。
參考詞匯：壽星the birthday person
Dear Peter,
Nice to hear from you. I’m glad to know that you are doing a project and I’d very much like to help you. __________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

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Dear Peter,
Nice to hear from you. I’m glad to know that you are doing a project and I’d very much like to help you. Chinese teenagers celebrate their birthdays in different ways. Some teenagers celebrate their birthdays at home or at restaurant. Usually the birthday person’s parents arrange the family gatherings. Another way is that the birthday person holds a party, inviting his or her friends to have fun drinking, singing and dancing together. A birthday cake is something that can not be spared. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents.
In my opinion, one’s birthday celebration should be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers, cook a delicious meal or do some housework for our parents to express our thanks to them for giving us lives and bringing us up.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，材料是考生熟悉的東西，考生不難理解寫作的目的和要求，文章的開頭已給出�？忌�重點(diǎn)應(yīng)認(rèn)真審題，審題包括幾個(gè)方面:1.文章的時(shí)態(tài)2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的把握準(zhǔn)確到位。3.考生要盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。
4.考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題難度適中。命題人作文的要點(diǎn)沒有一一列出，既給了學(xué)生的思維空間，又給了學(xué)生發(fā)揮自己的語言組織的能力的空間，沒有把學(xué)生的思維控制在某些要點(diǎn)的組織上。