Question

Health Magazine 就現(xiàn)代人的健康狀況進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，其結(jié)果是，與以前相比，人們的健康狀況有下滑現(xiàn)象。其原因主要有：1.工作忙碌,壓力過大，缺少鍛煉；2.生活沒有規(guī)律,熬夜，休息不夠；3.不少人有抽煙、喝酒的習(xí)慣。
請根據(jù)調(diào)查情況寫一篇100~120個詞的短文，內(nèi)容包括：
1.與過去相比，人們的健康狀況；
2.下滑的主要原因；
3.建議：至少給出兩點(diǎn)。
注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
Recently, the Health Magazine has conducted a survey of people’s health condition.

Answer 1

Recently, the Health Magazine has conducted a survey of people’s health condition. Compared with the past, people are in poorer condition.
One of the main reasons is that people are living a hectic life without taking enough exercise and suffer lots of stress. Besides, most of them have to stay up late at night with so little time to rest, making their lives quite irregular. Worse still, a number of these people have got into the habit of smoking and drinking alcohol.
To change this, one should form a good living habit by doing physical exercise regularly and try to keep away from cigarette and alcohol.

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類的作文，文字提示中給出了部分要點(diǎn)，在個人建議方面需要考生做適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充�？梢詮募訌�(qiáng)鍛煉，改變不健康的生活方式，讓生活有規(guī)律等方面著手。難點(diǎn)在于選擇合適的詞準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)文字提示中所需要表達(dá)的意思，要選擇高級的詞匯和句型來提高文章的層次和檔次。
點(diǎn)評：提綱類的作文關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略，在個人建議方面要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，可以從改變自己的生活方式方面著手，也可以從改變對健康的態(tài)度方面著手，可以加入與健康有關(guān)的諺語來提升文章的層次。