Question

假設(shè)你的朋友Linda ，現(xiàn)在正感到生活不快樂，不健康，有壓力，可又不知道如何改變自己的生活方式，于是寫信給你，請(qǐng)求你提些建議。
下面是你提的幾點(diǎn)建議，請(qǐng)按照以下內(nèi)容給Linda回一封信（約100詞左右）
1．要有足夠的睡眠，至少8小時(shí)，這樣才能精力充沛（energetic）、學(xué)習(xí)積極（active）。
2．多鍛煉是非常重要的。
3．多吃水果和蔬菜，禁止吃垃圾食品(junk food)。
4．學(xué)習(xí)之余聽聽音樂可以減輕壓力。
5．盡可能地微笑，它會(huì)幫助你快樂、忘記煩惱。
Dear Linda ：
If you  want to be healthy and happy，you need to have a healthy lifestyle. I have some advice for you and I hope you will follow all of it.                                                         
                                                                
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Linda:
If you want to be healthy and happy，you need to have a healthy lifestyle. I have some advice for you and I hope you will follow all of it. As a young student , you need to get enough sleep , so you need to try to go to bed earlier every night. You should try to sleep for at least 8 hours every day .That will help you be active and energetic for your day at school . Doing more exercise is also very important ,and you should remember to eat more vegetables and fruits. You mustn’t eat junk food . It can reduce your stress to listen to music sometimes after studying . Often smiling as often as possible can help you stay happy and forget your troubles .      
Yours,
Li Hua

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