Question

隨著“開心農(nóng)場(chǎng)”“QQ農(nóng)場(chǎng)”等娛樂游戲風(fēng)靡互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，許多中學(xué)生也加入了偷菜的行列。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勀銈�(gè)人的看法。

現(xiàn)   象	1. 沉迷其中，樂此不疲；2. 身在課堂，心在農(nóng)場(chǎng)； 3. 作業(yè)拖拉，成績下降。
原   因	1. 尋找農(nóng)耕的樂趣； 2. 釋放學(xué)習(xí)的壓力；3. 拉近朋友的距離。
你的看法	……(至少兩點(diǎn))

注意：    1. 不要逐字翻譯表格提示內(nèi)容，應(yīng)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 開頭已給出，不算入總詞數(shù)。
3. 詞數(shù)：120左右。
Nowadays, QQ Farm and Happy Farm are very popular among people from all walks of life. A large number of middle school students are also involved in the game.

Answer 1

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Some of them are addicted to it and take great delight in stealing vegetables online. In class, their minds are still wandering around the farm. They waste too much time on it so that they fail to hand in their homework in time and there is a sharp decline in their grades.
Many factors contribute to the popularity of the game. To begin with, it enables students to experience the pleasure of farming , which is beyond their reach in reality. In addition, students are under great pressure and farming online is a good way for them to relax. It can also bring friends closer and closer.
As far as I am concerned, though the game is really great fun, as senior students, we are supposed to focus on our studies. Also, I suggest schools starting after-school farming activities. Only in this way can students experience real happiness in farming.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文，所以首先要明確所要討論的話題，并且需要用第一人稱來寫。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使文章看起來更充實(shí)，并且一定要寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合作文的主題與開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于話題類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。