Question

請根據(jù)下列要求，以My First Stay at Home Alone為題，寫一篇100詞左右的文章。
內(nèi)容要點：1.父母出差，自己一個人在家；
2.自己照顧自己；
3.難忘有意義的經(jīng)歷。
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Answer 1

My first day at home alone was memorable. When I was twelve, once both of my mother and father were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day ,and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms respectively at 6:00, 6:10 and 6:15. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，話題是My First Stay at Home Alone：要點是1.父母出差，自己一個人在家；
2.自己照顧自己； 3.難忘有意義的經(jīng)歷。首先，我們應(yīng)該堅持平時的作文訓(xùn)練，作文的水平提高并非一朝一夕的事，所以要注意平時的積累；其次要注意話題作文的素材收集和常用句子的寫法，適當(dāng)進行必要地記誦。第三，注意中西方文體的差異，記住特殊問題的特殊格式。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。
點評：話題作文要圍繞話題展開，在于表達方式的選擇和要點的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。要符合英語習(xí)慣，所以在寫作的時候要變換句式，要寫得富于變化。