Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要求，以My First Stay at Home Alone為題，寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的文章。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.父母出差，自己一個(gè)人在家；
2.自己照顧自己；
3.難忘有意義的經(jīng)歷。
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Answer 1

My first day at home alone was memorable. When I was twelve, once both of my mother and father were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day ,and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms respectively at 6:00, 6:10 and 6:15. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，話題是My First Stay at Home Alone：要點(diǎn)是1.父母出差，自己一個(gè)人在家；
2.自己照顧自己； 3.難忘有意義的經(jīng)歷。首先，我們應(yīng)該堅(jiān)持平時(shí)的作文訓(xùn)練，作文的水平提高并非一朝一夕的事，所以要注意平時(shí)的積累；其次要注意話題作文的素材收集和常用句子的寫(xiě)法，適當(dāng)進(jìn)行必要地記誦。第三，注意中西方文體的差異，記住特殊問(wèn)題的特殊格式。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：話題作文要圍繞話題展開(kāi)，在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，所以在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要變換句式，要寫(xiě)得富于變化。