Question

假如你是李華，Tracy 即將結(jié)束你們學(xué)校作為交換生的學(xué)習(xí)生活并返回英國。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇?dú)g送詞。
1.       贊揚(yáng)她的善良友好；
2.       懷念與她相處的快樂時(shí)光；
3.       感謝她對大家英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；
4.       希望她有機(jī)會(huì)再來中國。
注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100詞；      2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear teachers and friends, I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England.
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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear teachers and friends, I’d like to say something before Tracy goes back to England.
On one hand, Tracy is such a kind and friendly girl that I feel happy to be her friend. Because of her good character she is very popular with us during her stay here. On the other hand, she gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with her. How can we forget the time that we spent together happily! I remember she doesn’t hesitate to help us whenever we have trouble in learning English. Therefore, we are grateful to Tracy from the bottom of our heart and we owe a lot of thanks to her.
True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with Tracy. I also hope that Tracy can come back to China and stay with us in the near future.

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
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