Question

當(dāng)前私家車在你們城市發(fā)展勢頭迅猛，但它帶來許多便利的同時，也帶來了一些弊端。上個月你們班就“私家車迅速發(fā)展的利與弊”進行了熱烈的討論，請根據(jù)下表提供的內(nèi)容，客觀介紹討論的情況，并談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ā?br />

優(yōu)勢	弊端	你的觀點
1.價格合理，普通家庭能買的起。 2．方便，可以提高生活質(zhì)量。 3．可以帶動其他產(chǎn)業(yè)提供更多的就業(yè)機會。	1.消耗大量能源，污染環(huán)境。 2．造成交通擁擠。 3.停車場地緊張。	？

注意：
1．對所給要點，不要簡單翻譯，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2．詞數(shù)：150 左右。
3．參考詞匯：
消耗consume (?vt?.)?尾氣the waste gas

Answer 1

Last month we had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of the rapid development of private cars in our city．People's opinions are quite different.?Firstly, car prices are reasonable, so owning a private car is no longer a dream for ordinary families．Secondly, people are enjoying its convenience and better life quality as well．What's more, some related industries have also been brought about, which contributes to more employment However, besides the advantages mentioned above, there also exist some disadvantages．Cars consume too much energy, and the waste gas from cars pollutes the environment．What's worse, there are not enough roads and traffic jams occur in the rush hours．Apart from that, people find it hard to park their cars due to the lack of parking lots．?
I strongly recommend the number of private cars be limited and public bus service be improved．The government should also take measures to reduce pollution.

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