Question

當(dāng)前私家車(chē)在你們城市發(fā)展勢(shì)頭迅猛，但它帶來(lái)許多便利的同時(shí)，也帶來(lái)了一些弊端。上個(gè)月你們班就“私家車(chē)迅速發(fā)展的利與弊”進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的內(nèi)容，客觀(guān)介紹討論的情況，并談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ā?br />

優(yōu)勢(shì)	弊端	你的觀(guān)點(diǎn)
1.價(jià)格合理，普通家庭能買(mǎi)的起。 2．方便，可以提高生活質(zhì)量。 3．可以帶動(dòng)其他產(chǎn)業(yè)提供更多的就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)。	1.消耗大量能源，污染環(huán)境。 2．造成交通擁擠。 3.停車(chē)場(chǎng)地緊張。	？

注意：
1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2．詞數(shù)：150 左右。
3．參考詞匯：
消耗consume (?vt?.)?尾氣the waste gas

Answer 1

Last month we had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of the rapid development of private cars in our city．People's opinions are quite different.?Firstly, car prices are reasonable, so owning a private car is no longer a dream for ordinary families．Secondly, people are enjoying its convenience and better life quality as well．What's more, some related industries have also been brought about, which contributes to more employment However, besides the advantages mentioned above, there also exist some disadvantages．Cars consume too much energy, and the waste gas from cars pollutes the environment．What's worse, there are not enough roads and traffic jams occur in the rush hours．Apart from that, people find it hard to park their cars due to the lack of parking lots．?
I strongly recommend the number of private cars be limited and public bus service be improved．The government should also take measures to reduce pollution.

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