Question

書(shū)面表達(dá) （滿分25分）
進(jìn)入高中三個(gè)月以來(lái)，你逐漸適應(yīng)了新的學(xué)習(xí)生活。你收到初中同學(xué)張磊的郵件，信中他向你訴說(shuō)了在高中學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到的困難。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封回信，幫助他分析存在的問(wèn)題并給出建議，最后附上真誠(chéng)的祝福。

遇到的困難	解決的方法
功課多，作業(yè)難	向老師求助，改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方式
朋友少，感到孤獨(dú)	主動(dòng)結(jié)交朋友，積極參加活動(dòng)
你的感受和體會(huì)

注意: 1. 詞數(shù)100-120。
首句已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
Dear Zhang Lei,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You told me that you are having trouble in life in senior school.
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Answer 1

Dear Zhang Lei,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You told me that you are having trouble in life in senior school. So I decide to write to you in order to offer my guidance on your learning and living problems.
In your letter, you have mentioned that you have too much homework to do and it is too difficult for you. In my opinion, you may turn to your teachers and make some changes in your learning style. That way, you can not only get along well with your teachers, but also play an important role in your own study.
In terms of friendship, you said you have suffered from loneliness because you have few friends. I think it is very normal when you just have spent three months in your new school and new class. It would be a good idea if you join in some school activities actively and try your best to make more friends. By doing this, you will find there are many lovely fiends around you and you will be more outgoing and easy-going.
I hope you will find my advice useful
Yours sincerely
XXX

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這是提綱式作文，要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，而且很詳細(xì)，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文要點(diǎn)全面使用了不少高級(jí)詞匯和句型：turn to 求助于，In my opinion,在我看來(lái)， get along well with和…相處好， play an important role 起著重要的作用，not only …but also…不但…而且，In terms of 就…而言，suffer from遭受， So I decide to write to you in order to offer my guidance on your learning and living problems.這句話用了目的狀語(yǔ)， you have mentioned that you have too much homework to do and it is too difficult for you. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)從句， I think it is very normal when you just have spent three months in your new school and new class. It would be a good idea if you join in some school activities actively and try your best to make more friends. 這兩句話都用了it做形式主語(yǔ)。