Question

“Beijing plans to reduce the English section of National College Entrance Examination, the Gaokao, from 150 points to 100 points by 2016.”
請(qǐng)依據(jù)上面這則新聞，結(jié)合實(shí)際，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)，并簡(jiǎn)單陳述你的理由。
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
④詞數(shù)為120左右。
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Answer 1

There is some news that English may account for a lower proportion in our national college entrance examination, but I don’t think it has any effect on our English learning. English is still playing an important part in our daily life.
With the development of China’s economy, more and more people are rich enough to travel or study abroad. English is the first problem they are faced with. Besides, as devices and household appliances of foreign brands are flooding our daily life, English takes a more important part. What’s more, armed with a good command of English, we will be better prepared for the challenges of globalization.
However, reducing the English section is good for us students. It helps to lessen our academic burden. But this change does not mean English study can be ignored. Being tested for less score doesn’t mean the subject can be taken lightly. In my opinion, the national enthusiasm for English will keep on.

試題分析：本文是一篇材料作文，開(kāi)放性作文。所給材料雖然新穎，但是所談的話(huà)題考生卻非常熟悉，寫(xiě)起來(lái)有話(huà)可說(shuō)。寫(xiě)好本篇作文的難點(diǎn)有兩個(gè)：一是怎么用簡(jiǎn)短的話(huà)吧“這則新聞”的內(nèi)容說(shuō)清楚；二是就“這則新聞”的內(nèi)容就“自己認(rèn)識(shí)方面”談?wù)劺碛�。至于“談�(wù)勀銓?duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)”則相對(duì)要容易得多。另外文章用典型的三段式，要注意段與段之間的順利過(guò)渡。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文采用典型的三段式：揭示話(huà)題、談對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)和陳述理由。范文第一段用兩句話(huà)就揭示了話(huà)題，并恰到好處地過(guò)渡到下一段。第一句話(huà)句子非常長(zhǎng)，多達(dá)30字，充分顯示了作者駕馭句子的高超能力。這是一個(gè)并列復(fù)合句：“but”連接的并列句和兩個(gè)名詞性從句(同位語(yǔ)從句：that English may account for a lower proportion in our national college entrance examination和賓語(yǔ)從句：it has any effect on our English learning.)。第二句話(huà)是個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句與第二段內(nèi)容進(jìn)行無(wú)縫對(duì)接。第二段過(guò)渡詞句(Besides,what’s more等)的運(yùn)用和各種各樣短語(yǔ)(With the development of, more and more, are faced with, takes a more important part ,with a good command of ,be better prepared for等)的運(yùn)用為文章增色不少。第三段用三句話(huà)簡(jiǎn)潔明了談了自己的理由。并用一句話(huà)“In my opinion, the national enthusiasm for English will keep on.”來(lái)總結(jié)升華本篇文章的主題，為這篇文章做出了圓滿(mǎn)的收尾。