Question

假設(shè)你是李華，倫敦奧組委在全球中學(xué)生中招募志愿者。你申請參加，希望高中畢業(yè)后能得到實踐鍛煉。請根據(jù)以下要點給組委會負(fù)責(zé)人Mr．Steven寫封電子郵件：
1．自我介紹；
2．陳述參加的目的 (提供服務(wù)、交友、提高語言水平)。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；  
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Steven,
I'm Li Hua from China and I'm writing to you to apply for the job as a volunteer for the coming London Olympic Games.
I'm a friendly and helpful boy/girl, and I'm active in taking part in volunteer activities. There will be less language difficulty for me because English is my favorite subject and I'm quite good at it. What's more. I’ll graduate from senior high this summer and I'll have proper time to work for the Olympics.
I'm crazy about sports and if I can get the opportunity, I'll try my best to serve for the Olympics. On the other side. I'm sure that I can benefit a lot from the volunteering job, such as making new friends, improving my communication skills and my oral English level. I'would appreciate it very much if I could be given the chance.
l'm looking forward to your early reply !
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua  

試題分析：本文講述的是李華要成為志愿者所寫的申請書。屬于半開放性作文，使用的時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，使用第一人稱。在自我介紹的時候，考生可以用自己或者身邊一個有顯著特點的人作為原型。在寫作時，要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等
【亮點說明】本文中的高級句式使用較好，如I would appreciate it very much if I could be given the chance.中的I would appreciate it….；詞匯的運(yùn)用也很到位：apply for, look forward to等等；關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用很合理如：What's more，On the other side.等等。