Question

假定你是李華，《中國日報》（China Daily）計劃面向中學生舉辦環(huán)境保護知識競賽（Environment - protecting Knowledge Contest），請你作為該報的一名特約通訊員，代表學生會對所在學校的學生寫一則海報。
內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．舉辦目的（重視環(huán)境作用，提高環(huán)境保護意識）
2．舉辦時間（10月14日—31日）
3．參與方法：在報紙上答題；裁下答案，在截止日期前郵寄至《中國日報》。
4．希望同學們平時留意環(huán)保方面的知識并踴躍參加。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．海報開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
Dear schoolmates,
We all agree that we are closely connected with the environments, but how well do we know?
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Students’ Union

Answer 1

Dear schoolmates,
We all agree that we are closely connected with the environments, but how well do we know?
I order to get us high school students to attach importance to the environments and improve our environment-protecting awareness, China Daily is planning to hold an Environment-protecting Knowledge Contest.
The contest will start on October 14th and end on 31st. Remember, you can take the contest on China Daily newspaper, which is very familiar and popular among high school students. Your answers should be cut down from the newspaper and sent to China Daily before the deadline.
I hope that all of our schoolmates can pay attention to relative information about the environments in our daily life to prepare for the contest and take an active party in it in time.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這是提綱式作文，要點已經(jīng)給出，而且很詳細，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，根據(jù)所給要點，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】這篇范文要點全面，語言簡潔，但是不缺乏高級詞匯和句型：be connected with和…有聯(lián)系， attach importance to重視，cut down剪下， Remember, you can take the contest on China Daily newspaper, which is very familiar and popular among high school students. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句， I hope that all of our schoolmates can pay attention to relative information about the environments in our daily life to prepare for the contest and take an active party in it in time.這句話用了不定式做狀語。