Question

2013年《韓國時報》題為“假如中日步入戰(zhàn)爭”的文章說，日本自衛(wèi)隊員是世界上最強武裝力量的光榮子孫，這支部隊歷史上經(jīng)歷過太平洋戰(zhàn)爭等諸多血戰(zhàn)，訓練水平和戰(zhàn)斗經(jīng)驗遠強于中國，而且獲益于中國的獨生子女政策，現(xiàn)在的解放軍士兵大多是“小皇帝”，因此還是自衛(wèi)隊戰(zhàn)斗力更強。
請結(jié)合自身和周圍同學實際，試分析
1. 獨生子女政策的利弊
2. 身為獨生子女的我們怎樣培養(yǎng)自己的獨立自主能力
3. 詞數(shù)120左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
The one-child policy has been adopted in China for decades.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_ _________________________________________________________ _________________________________

Answer 1

The one-child policy has been adopted in China. And it does benefit not only the society but also individuals.  With a better control of the population, the country has made remarkable achievements in the aspects of economic and social development while the family can focus on the only child and afford better education for him.
However, it still brings about a series of problems. As the center attention of families, the only children are easily spoiled by their parents and grandparents. Therefore, they are often selfish and lacking in independence.
As the only child in my family, I think it’s important for us to cultivate our independence and develop a strong sense of responsibility since we are the future of our country. We can share some housework with our parents and should keep it in mind that it’s better to give than to receive.

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。作文給出了一個話題，關(guān)于中國的獨生子女問題，給了兩個提綱，但是沒有具體要點，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。考生要圍繞這兩個問題，展開敘述，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。
【亮點說明】范文出現(xiàn)了一些短語：not only…but also…不但…而且，brings about 產(chǎn)生，a series of problems一系列問題，be lacking in缺乏，.和多變的句式：With a better control of the population, the country has made remarkable achievements in the aspects of economic and social development while the family can focus on the only child and afford better education for him.這句話用while表示轉(zhuǎn)折， As the only child in my family, I think it’s important for us to cultivate our independence and develop a strong sense of responsibility since we are the future of our country. 這句話用了原因狀語從句和it做形式主語，We can share some housework with our parents and should keep it in mind that it’s better to give than to receive.這句話用了it做形式賓語。