Question

請根據以下提示，結合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
Failure is annoying, but what failure can teach us may never be taught in other ways．
注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③內容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；
④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
⑤詞數為120左右。

Answer 1

No one can ever achieve any success without failure as failure can usually help us learn what our strengths and weaknesses are.
When I was in Junior High School, most of my teachers and students thought it better to study science, saying that it promised a better future. I tried to follow this trend despite the fact that I was not good at Physics. It was only two months later, when I failed an extremely important Physics exam, that I realized my talent lay in subjects like Chinese, English as well as History. I switched for arts immediately.
The following years witnessed my excellent school performance then. So failure is not as terrible as we have expected as long as we can learn something from it.

試題分析： 本文開放性作文，給出一個話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。這種類型的作文，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，選擇句式時要賦予變化，才能更好的駕馭。同時要選擇適當的連接詞，在敘事的同時充分表達個人觀點，注意時態(tài)人稱保持一致。用高級詞匯來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點說明】 本文用了一些較出彩的句型結構如  think it adj for sb to do sth It was only two months later, when I failed an extremely important Physics exam, that I realized my talent lay in subjects like Chinese, English as well as History,。不僅用強調句話來表達，還加入插入語，提升整個文章的難度，又突出句型運用的靈活性。
When I was in Junior High School, most of my teachers and students thought it better to study science, saying that it promised a better future此句中還運用非謂語動詞的形式，句子通暢連貫。還運用高級詞匯如performance,terrible , expect ,extremely 提升句子亮點。