Question

你所在的班級將要舉行一次主題為“What Can We Do for Our School?”的英語演講比賽。請寫一篇英語演講稿，要求從以下四個方面中任選一至二個進(jìn)行闡述，并舉例加以說明。
1.關(guān)心他人；            2.美化校園；
3.愛護學(xué)校設(shè)施；        4.營造良好的學(xué)習(xí)氛圍。
注意：
1.不要在書面表達(dá)中出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和本人姓名，否則本節(jié)判為零分；
2.詞數(shù)：100左右；
3.參考詞匯：
愛心——love and care; 校園——campus; 設(shè)施——facilities; 氛圍——environment.
4.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，且不計入詞數(shù)。
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something. ________________________________________________________________
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Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

Hello ,everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.
The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. Every on of us may plant a tree in the school, or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus. We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan.
The second thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school. When we leave the classroom, we should not leave the tap water running or water any materials in the laboratory class.
If everyone does one thing for our school , I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in .
Thank you for listening.

試題分析：本文是演講稿，并且給出部分的文字提示。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的組織要點的能力。首先選擇自己熟悉的句型或短語，并且要賦予變化，才能更好的駕馭。因為是演講稿，最好用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。注意連詞的使用，做到流暢自然。
【亮點說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一引起重要的短語，如 form a good habit of 養(yǎng)成一種良好的習(xí)慣 leave the tap water running ，讓水一起流。還有復(fù)雜多變的句型The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful.，這一句話中運用定語從句，to do 做表語。We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan.狀語從句。語法知識掌握牢固，同時句子流暢，對比句，The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful 和The second thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school，節(jié)奏感很強，條理清楚。