Question

假如你是小華, Jane是美國(guó)人。在她暑假來(lái)中國(guó)游玩時(shí)你們相識(shí),并成為好朋友。Jane回國(guó)后,你很想念她,于是給她寫(xiě)了一封信,并且和她談了你對(duì)高一新生活的感受，信頭信尾均已給出。要求120詞左右。
內(nèi)容包括：
1.新學(xué)校的生活、學(xué)習(xí)情況與感受。
2.表達(dá)對(duì)她父母的問(wèn)候，并請(qǐng)她明年來(lái)你�？纯吹脑竿�。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely,
Xiaohua

Answer 1

Dear Jane, 
How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.
Give my best regards to your parents and I am looking forward to your visiting my school next year.
Yours sincerely,
Xiaohua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。要求給Jane寫(xiě)一封信,并且和她談了你對(duì)高一新生活的感受。內(nèi)容包括： 1.新學(xué)校的生活、學(xué)習(xí)情況與感受。2.表達(dá)對(duì)她父母的問(wèn)候，并請(qǐng)她明年來(lái)你校看看的愿望。
要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。書(shū)信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，要點(diǎn)全面， 詞組有：keep fit.保持健康，do more exercise多鍛煉， Give my best regards to代某人向…問(wèn)好， look forward to 盼望，句式多變：I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. 這句話用不定式， The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句。