Question

大學(xué)生活即將開(kāi)始．你將面對(duì)新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愦蛩闳绾伟才拍愕拇髮W(xué)生括。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：
1. 確定新的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)；
2. 改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法；
3. 學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活；
4. 參加各種課外活動(dòng)；
5. 處理好與同學(xué)的關(guān)系；
注意: 1. 短文的內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；
2. 短文單詞數(shù)： 100 左右(開(kāi)頭己給出的單詞不計(jì)人單詞總數(shù)）。
I will go to college in the near future._______________________________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version：
I will go to college in the near future. I have some plans for my future college life. As is known to everybody, study always comes first, so I plan to set new study goals for me to work for and improve my way of learning. What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live independently and deal with difficult problems or tough situations. In my spare time I will actively take part in different kinds of school activities, for example，I will often go to the English Corner to practise my spoken English. In addition, getting along well with my classmates and teachers is an important part of my personal development. I hope I will have a wonderful college life.

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要求寫(xiě)進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的計(jì)劃安排，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)。首先，因?yàn)槭菍?duì)未來(lái)做計(jì)劃，所以在時(shí)態(tài)選擇上要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。其次文章要點(diǎn)較多，在注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)的同時(shí)，還要在陳述各要點(diǎn)時(shí)采用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞以使文章內(nèi)容有條理性，有層次感。再次在內(nèi)容上要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，做出細(xì)節(jié)上的補(bǔ)充，以使行文連貫，內(nèi)容完整。最后要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯以提高文章檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇范文開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山提出中心，然后詳細(xì)介紹自己的各項(xiàng)計(jì)劃打算，這種結(jié)構(gòu)安排使文章中心突出，目的明確。文中插入語(yǔ)what’s more、in addition等插入語(yǔ)的使用使文章層次分明，脈絡(luò)清晰。此外文中各種結(jié)構(gòu)的使用和多種句式的出現(xiàn)也是文章的一大亮點(diǎn)，比如不定式短語(yǔ)it is necessary for me to learn to live independently，動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)getting along well with my classmates and teachers is an important part of my personal development，定語(yǔ)從句As is known to everybody，狀語(yǔ)從句as I am away from my parents等。