Question

大學生活即將開始．你將面對新的學習和生活環(huán)境。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇英語短文，談談你打算如何安排你的大學生括。內容要點應包括：
1. 確定新的學習目標；
2. 改進學習方法；
3. 學會獨立生活；
4. 參加各種課外活動；
5. 處理好與同學的關系；
注意: 1. 短文的內容要連貫、完整；
2. 短文單詞數(shù)： 100 左右(開頭己給出的單詞不計人單詞總數(shù)）。
I will go to college in the near future._______________________________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version：
I will go to college in the near future. I have some plans for my future college life. As is known to everybody, study always comes first, so I plan to set new study goals for me to work for and improve my way of learning. What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live independently and deal with difficult problems or tough situations. In my spare time I will actively take part in different kinds of school activities, for example，I will often go to the English Corner to practise my spoken English. In addition, getting along well with my classmates and teachers is an important part of my personal development. I hope I will have a wonderful college life.

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求寫進入大學后的計劃安排，寫作時要注意以下幾點。首先，因為是對未來做計劃，所以在時態(tài)選擇上要使用一般將來時。其次文章要點較多，在注意不要遺漏要點的同時，還要在陳述各要點時采用適當?shù)倪B接詞以使文章內容有條理性，有層次感。再次在內容上要適當發(fā)揮想象，做出細節(jié)上的補充，以使行文連貫，內容完整。最后要注意使用高級詞匯以提高文章檔次。
【亮點說明】本篇范文開門見山提出中心，然后詳細介紹自己的各項計劃打算，這種結構安排使文章中心突出，目的明確。文中插入語what’s more、in addition等插入語的使用使文章層次分明，脈絡清晰。此外文中各種結構的使用和多種句式的出現(xiàn)也是文章的一大亮點，比如不定式短語it is necessary for me to learn to live independently，動名詞短語getting along well with my classmates and teachers is an important part of my personal development，定語從句As is known to everybody，狀語從句as I am away from my parents等。