Question

給朋友的建議信——如何學好英語。你的朋友Cheery進入高中后覺得學習英語的方式和初中相比有很大的不同，苦惱之余向你寫信尋求建議。請你以李華的名義給她寫一封回信，和她分享自己學習英語的體會，并給她提供一些英語學習方面的建議。
要點：1. 開始學習高中英語時，意識到其比初中英語難很多，不要喪失信心；
2. 意識到學習英語的重要性，對英語感興趣；
3. 介紹日常學習生活中能夠學好英語的方法；
4. 向老師和同學請教。
要求：詞數100—120字。  
提示：初中：junior high school        高中：senior high school
Dear Cherry,
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Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Cheery,
I am glad to have received your letter, and I happen to know something about your problem. To my surprise, you said you would give up learning English because you haven’t done well in it recently. You were not interested in it any longer and were going to give up.
I know it is not easy to learn English, but you should not lose heart. Go on learning it. You see, English is widely used in the world today and it will be an important tool in our future work. Besides, English has become more and more important in our daily life. Where there is a will, there is a way. Can’t you remember that? If you study hard, I’m sure you will succeed in the end.
I think listening, speaking, reading and writing are the essential parts in learning English. As for practicing listening, we can watch English films and listening to English songs. In our daily study, we can communicate with our English teachers, classmates and the foreigners. In order to strengthen our reading abilities, we can read newspapers, magazines and even the English novels. Once we read a lot and accumulate more, we will write good articles. We should always keep in mind that practice makes perfect. In addition, you can consult with your teachers and classmates about the ways of well learning English. During this process, you will gradually find you are fond of English. I’m looking forwards to hearing good news from you.
Best wishes!
Yours

試題分析：本文是一篇書信類應用文。文章給出了較詳細的漢語提示，文章的話題涉及英語學習，此話題貼近學生生活，讓學生有話可寫。成文時應注意：1.文章內容要點要齊全。（1）開始學習高中英語時，意識到其比初中英語難很多，不要喪失信心；（2） 意識到學習英語的重要性，對英語感興趣；（3） 介紹日常學習生活中能夠學好英語的方法；（4） 向老師和同學請教。2.人稱：第一人稱和第二人稱；3.時態(tài)：一般現在時；4.適當使用一些高級詞匯、短語和句型，以提高文章檔次；5.恰當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章表達自然、流暢。
【亮點說明】使用了從句：because you haven’t done well in it recently；Where there is a will, there is a way. If you study hard, I’m sure you will succeed in the end.；Once we read a lot and accumulate more, we will write good articles.使用非謂語動詞短語：In order to strengthen our reading abilities, we can read newspapers, magazines and even the English novels.插入語：To my surprise, As for practicing listening, In addition, Besides,