Question

隨著網(wǎng)絡的發(fā)展，文化的交流越來越密切，英國高中生Michael在網(wǎng)上刊登了一則啟示：希望結識一位中國同齡朋友，以便學習中國的語言、文化。請你以一位中國高中生的名義用英文給Michael發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：（1）你是如何得知Michael的愿望的；（2）你愿意成為Michael的朋友；（3）你打算怎么幫助Michael；（4）你期盼他的回復。
要求：字數(shù)120字左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實的學校和姓名！
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Answer 1

Dear Michael,
I’ve learnt it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture. I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I would like to be your best friend.
I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture. When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can. How do you think?
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Anne

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。要求以一位中國高中生的名義用英文給Michael發(fā)一封電子郵件。要點都已經(jīng)給出，要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。
【亮點說明】 I’ve learnt it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.這句話用了賓語從句和so as to do表示目的， I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture.這句話用了as often as possible盡可能經(jīng)常的， When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. 這句話用了不定式做定語，賓語和詞組：show you around 帶某人參觀，historical places of interest 歷史名勝。