Question

現(xiàn)在，QQ空間(the QQ zone)越來(lái)越受到學(xué)生的歡迎，但不同的學(xué)生有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，介紹學(xué)生不同的觀點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法。

60%的學(xué)生贊成	40%的學(xué)生反對(duì)
通過(guò)寫日志(blog), 可以自由的表達(dá)所思所想； 收集信息； 分享趣事，交朋友。	學(xué)生有可能上當(dāng)受騙； 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、精力和金錢； 影響學(xué)業(yè)。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于100.
Nowadays, the QQ zone has become more and more popular among middle
school students, but different students hold different views about this phenomenon.
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Answer 1

Nowadays, the QQ zone has become more and more popular among middle school students, but different students hold different views about this phenomenon.
60% of the students think it helpful because they can express themselves freely by writing blogs. What’s more, it is convenient for them to collect information. Another reason why they like the QQ zone is that it is a place where they share interesting things and make friends.
Other students, however, are strongly against the QQ zone, saying that students can be easily cheated on the QQ zone. To make things worse, they will waste not only their money but also their energy and time, which may influence their studies.
In my opinion, the QQ zone is a useful tool as it can provide us with access to updated information about the world, but we should learn to make proper use of it.

試題分析：本篇寫作題材是對(duì)QQ空間的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。這種文章一般分四段：第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第三段反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語(yǔ)及句式，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文句式復(fù)雜多變：60% of the students think it helpful because they can express themselves freely by writing blogs. 這句話用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)，it is convenient for them to collect information. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，Another reason why they like the QQ zone is that it is a place where they share interesting things and make friends.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句和表語(yǔ)從句，  Other students, however, are strongly against the QQ zone, saying that students can be easily cheated on the QQ zone. 這句話用現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ)，they will waste not only their money but also their energy and time, which may influence their studies.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，還有文章還使用了What’s more, however, To make things worse,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。