Question

假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格為英文報(bào)紙Teens寫(xiě)一篇評(píng)論，陳述你的觀點(diǎn)。

報(bào)紙的優(yōu)點(diǎn)	學(xué)生最喜愛(ài)欄目	兩點(diǎn)建議
①了解很多信息，如音樂(lè)、文學(xué)、教育、體育、科技等。 ② 經(jīng)常閱讀該報(bào)，增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)、拓寬視野、提高英語(yǔ)水平。	①名稱(chēng)：Help ②原因：幫助解決學(xué)習(xí)和生活上的問(wèn)題。	① 開(kāi)設(shè)環(huán)境教育欄目，介紹環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的知識(shí)。 ②......

注意：
①詞數(shù)120左右。
②短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
③參考詞匯：文學(xué)literature；拓寬視野broaden one’s horizons；欄目column
Teens is very popular among students. From this newspaper students can...
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I hope Teens will be much more helpful to the students in the future!

Answer 1

Teens is very popular among students. From this newspaper students can get information about a lot of things such as music, literature, education, sports, science and technology. And all articles are written in excellent English. Therefore, by reading Teens, students can not only gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons, but they can also improve their English, especially the abilities of English reading and writing. The students’ favourite column is Help because it can help them work out problems on their study or life.
I’d like to make two suggestions for the newspaper. First, it can start a new column named Environmental Education to introduce knowledge on how to protect the environment. Second, it may be a good idea for the newspaper to organize some reading competitions. I’m sure it will encourage more students to read Teens.
I hope Teens will be much more helpful to the students in the future!

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：為英文報(bào)紙Teens寫(xiě)一篇評(píng)論，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，這篇文章的提綱很詳細(xì)，根據(jù)所給提綱，以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文使用了一些短語(yǔ)：broaden their horizons,開(kāi)闊視野， encourage … to鼓勵(lì)某人做…work out 算出，解決，還有句式也富有變化：And all articles are written in excellent English. by reading Teens, students can not only gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons, but they can also improve their English, especially the abilities of English reading and writing. 這句話(huà)用了not only..but also…結(jié)構(gòu)， it can start a new column named Environmental Education to introduce knowledge on how to protect the environment.這句話(huà)用了不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)， it may be a good idea for the newspaper to organize some reading competitions.這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，還有文章還使用了Therefore,First, Second,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。