Question

最近我校舉辦了一次英語書法比賽。大部分同學們積極參與，但少數(shù)同學書寫不好，也不愿改善。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給《二十一世紀報》寫一篇短文，分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因并發(fā)表自己的看法。

現(xiàn)象	一些學生不善書寫，也不愿改善書寫
原因	1.可以借助電腦，沒有必要練字； 2.功課太忙，沒時間練字； 3.練字見效慢，很難練好。
你的看法	……

　　注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
In order to arouse the students' interest in English learning and enrich our school life, we
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Answer 1

In order to arouse the students’ interest in English learning and enrich our school life, we held an English Handwriting Competition. Many students took an active part in the activity. However, some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting. The reasons are as follows:
On one hand, they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer. On the other hand, they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice. Besides, practicing handwriting is so difficult that they can’t make great progress in a short time.
In my view, Students’ beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to themselves. What’s more, good handwriting is always appreciated by people, especially by teachers. Therefore, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點說明】some students who are poor at handwriting don’t want to improve their handwriting.這句話里面用了定語從句， they think that there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting because they can just use a computer. 這里用了there is no need to do...句型，和because引導的原因狀語從句，On the other hand, they believe that they are too busy with their studies to find time to practice.這里是too...to...句型，還有這篇范文有個明顯的特點，就是關聯(lián)詞很多，如on one hand...， On the other hand, Besides，Therefore，What’s more等，這樣文章顯得很連貫。