Question

最近你所在的學校選出一男一女兩名學生作為學校的形象大使，希望他們可以成為其他學生學習的模范。為此學生中展開了激烈的爭論。請你根據下列提示，以“Do we need image ambassadors?” 為題給某英語報紙寫一篇文章。
注意：1. 詞數: 120左右。2. 詞匯： image ambassador 形象大使。
3. 短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。 
　　Recently my school has chosen a boy and a girl to be its image ambassadors and hopes that others can learn from the two model students.
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Answer 1

Recently my school has chosen a boy and a girl to be its image ambassadors and hopes that others can learn from the two model students. There is a heated debate among the students on this issue.
Some students think that an image ambassador can set a good example for all the other students and inspire all of them. What’s more, in order to be an image ambassador, everyone will try their best to get rid of their bad habits and pay more attention to their appearance and develop their abilities. However, other students hold different views. They believe a person’s inner qualities play a more important role in their life. Besides, each student’s unique style should be appreciated. They are also worried that some students may pay too much attention to their appearance.
As far as I am concerned, image ambassadors can’t set up a standard image for all of the students to follow. As a student, we shouldn’t place too much importance on image. Instead, the students’ abilities should be the most important thing to consider.

試題分析：本篇寫作是開放式的作文，只有話題，沒有要點，要學生結合說明自己確定提綱，題材是對形象大使的兩種不同觀點。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述；正方觀點和反方觀點以及自己觀點。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據時要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點表達時要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達作者的意思。考生應明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確地表達意思的能力�？忌鷳�該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點說明】文章觀點明確，條理清晰，句式富有變化：Some students think that an image ambassador can set a good example for all the other students and inspire all of them. 這句話用了set a good example for“為,….樹立榜樣”，in order to be an image ambassador, everyone will try their best to get rid of their bad habits and pay more attention to their appearance and develop their abilities.這句話用了不定式做目的狀語，They believe a person’s inner qualities play a more important role in their life.這句話用了play an important role起著一個重要的作用。image ambassadors can’t set up a standard image for all of the students to follow.這句話用了不定式做定語， 還有文章還使用了What’s more, However, Besides, As far as I am concerned,這樣的關聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。