Question

日前我校學(xué)生會提出倡議，為解決早晚上下學(xué)高峰時間校門口的擁堵問題，倡導(dǎo)使用低碳的交通方式。為此，學(xué)生會將舉辦主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1. 目前，汽車帶來的空氣污染和家長開車接送上下學(xué)的弊端，如：校門口的擁堵和容易引起交通事故等問題。
2. 騎自行車上學(xué)的益處，如環(huán)保、有利健康，培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立能力等。
注意：
(1)對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
(2)詞數(shù)150左右。演講稿開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
(3)作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）節(jié)能(energy saving)
Good afternoon, everyone ,
I am very glad to give a speech here. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
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Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone,
I am very glad to give a speech here. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
As we all know, with the improvement of people’s living standards, private cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. And every morning our school gate is always crowded with the cars of parents who drive their sons and daughter to school.
How can we solve the problems? In my opinion, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles are energy-saving and environmentally friendly. For another, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. What’s more, riding to school can also help us less dependent on our parents.
I think the commitment to environmental protection and energy saving is what everyone should take on .Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!

試題分析：本題是材料作文，要求以“Let’s Ride Bicycles”為主題，寫一篇演講稿。作文要包含所有要點(diǎn)，不能逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)擴(kuò)句，使用優(yōu)美的句子來增加作文的亮點(diǎn)。作文開頭部分已經(jīng)給出，可以接著往下寫。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了較多的連接詞As we all know, In my opinion, For one thing, For another, What’s more, Therefore等，使文章看起來比較連貫，銜接緊密。使用了許多短語，像with the improvement of, such as, is crowded with, take the responsibility to等；定語從句who drive their sons and daughter to school，名詞性從句what everyone should take on，非謂語動詞bringing great convenience to, riding bicycles的使用，也給文章增色不少。