Question

假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在正參加一場英語演講比賽，你抽到的演講題目是Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine, 請你就該話題展開演講。你的演講必須包含以下三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：
1.你對此話的理解； 2. 用一個(gè)事例來支持你的理解； 3 .總結(jié)發(fā)言。
注意：詞數(shù)120左右。首尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
It’s my honor to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”.
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Thanks for your attention!

Answer 1

Ladies and Gentlemen,
It’s my honour to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”. It conveys the message that positive attitude really counts in our life. Once we adopt a positive attitude towars life, we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way, realize our dreams and gain success.
Here I share one of my experiences with you. With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, I was filled with great anxiety. Under great pressure, I couldn’t apply myself to study, resulting in failing an important examination. And you can guess, I got very frustrated. I remember clearly when I was in a bad mood, my headteacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and gave me a badge with a big smile on it and said, “In life we all have those moments when we can’t achieve what we want. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, but turn them into motivation and let them inspire you.” The badge she gave to me was a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved in the next examination.
As we can see in the story, it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to confront tough difficulties and with smile , you can improve your result to achieve anything you want in life.
Thanks for your attention!

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一篇題為“Smile for life, and every day will be sunshine”的演講稿。內(nèi)容要求包括三個(gè)方面，所以在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上可以采用三段式，來分別介紹三方面的內(nèi)容。此外，為了充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容，可以充分發(fā)揮想象力，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。在語言方面，因?yàn)楸疚囊�求寫的是演講稿所以語言要有感染力，而且還要注意連接詞的正確運(yùn)用，以使文章內(nèi)容連貫，語言自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文在內(nèi)容形式上都符合演講稿的要求，而且三段式的段落安排也使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了。文中高級詞匯adopt、Consequently、approach、drawing near的使用顯示了作者對詞匯的準(zhǔn)確把握能力。而強(qiáng)調(diào)句it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all.，狀語從句Once we adopt a positive att非限制性定語從句：itude towards life,定語從句which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life As we can see in the story, it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all.和短語With the College Entrance Examination drawing near、Just then等多變的句式也顯示了作者深厚的語言功底，是文章的一大亮點(diǎn)。此外，作者以自身的經(jīng)歷為例更增添了文章的親和力和感召力�？傊�，這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的范文。