Question

假設(shè)你應(yīng)邀參加學(xué)校組織的“英語學(xué)習(xí)師生座談會(huì)”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對(duì)學(xué)校今后的英語教學(xué)提出建議。

自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況	1.英語學(xué)習(xí)的目的  2.英語學(xué)習(xí)的方法  3.課外自學(xué)的途徑……….
對(duì)學(xué)校英語教學(xué)的建議	（請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點(diǎn)建議）。

注意：1.對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。
2.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
3.文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you.                                                                  
                                                                                
                                                                                
Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.
Thank you for listening.

試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文，要求寫一篇發(fā)言稿，材料以表格的形式給出，清晰明了，容易構(gòu)思。作文主要從自己的情況和提出建議兩方面著手，寫作時(shí)，做到條理要清晰、語意連貫。范文使用第一人稱，比較客觀和禮貌。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了較多的短語，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)，像share...with, be interested in, put ...to use, I'd like to, in order to等；范文還使用了it’s +形容詞for sb to do句型，賓語從句what we’ve learned，suggest that (should) do句型等，顯示出較強(qiáng)的語法功底。另外，范文注意句與句的銜接，使用了很多的連接詞，像Naturally, As everybody knows, After class, Besides, Now等；用Firstly，Secondly，F(xiàn)inally表示列舉，看起來很有條理。范文還使用了比喻句just like bricks in a building，把詞匯比作磚瓦，給作文增色不少。