Question

Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
1、生活中困難不可避免，面對(duì)困難需要信心…
2、試舉一例說(shuō)明信心在學(xué)習(xí)（考試、生活等）方面的作用…
3、你對(duì)困難的態(tài)度…

Answer 1

One possible version：
It is well-known that we are in the world with various difficulties. Faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence .With confidence, we can find the problem is not as “huge” as we imagine. Take myself as an example. Once in an exam, it was said that the exam would be difficult, and I was at first a little nervous. When the exam began, I built up my confidence and persuaded myself that I was capable of figuring out all the problems. What was unexpected was that I got the highest scores in the class！
From my experience, I draw a conclusion that we can make it as long as we have confidence in whatever we do.With confidence, we will overcome all the difficulty. Nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要求談?wù)撁鎸?duì)困難時(shí)所需的信心，首先要根據(jù)提示信息確定要點(diǎn)，本文要點(diǎn)有三方面，首先講明信心的重要性、然后舉例、最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。其次在遣詞造句上要將有效信息和發(fā)揮想象的內(nèi)容，增添的細(xì)節(jié)等用靈活的句式表達(dá)出來(lái)，比如賓語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句和各種短語(yǔ)等。 此外還要巧妙地運(yùn)用一些過(guò)渡詞或短語(yǔ)來(lái)連接成文，使行文連貫、語(yǔ)言流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文開(kāi)篇提出自信的重要性，然后舉例說(shuō)明，最后講述自己的觀點(diǎn)，并且與文章開(kāi)頭相呼應(yīng)。這種結(jié)構(gòu)安排使文章脈絡(luò)清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，也表現(xiàn)了作者清晰的思路。文中句式較為豐富，比如主語(yǔ)從句It is well-known that we are in the world with various difficulties.狀語(yǔ)從句When the exam began,賓語(yǔ)從句we can find the problem is not as “huge” as we imagine同位語(yǔ)從句I draw a conclusion that we can make it as long as we have confidence表語(yǔ)從句What was unexpected was that I got the highest scores in the class！等。此外高級(jí)詞匯be capable of 和figuring out的出現(xiàn)也是文章的一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。