Question

一家知名外資企業(yè)準備與當?shù)卣�府合作修建一所國際學校為了、建辦﹑好學校，該企業(yè)總裁Mr. White廣泛征求學生意見，并公開了他的郵地址。
請你以李華的名義給他寫一封E-mail，談談你的建議及理由。
內容要點：
1．學習環(huán)境 （如：教室，操場……）
2. 特色課程（如：網(wǎng)球，鋼琴……）
3. ……
要求：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和學校的名稱。
3. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Mr. White,
I am glad to hear you will build an international school, and I’d like to give you some advice. ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 
                                                                                            
    
I hope I can enter the school. 
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. White,
I am glad to hear you will build an international school, and I’d like to give you some advice. I think the new school should be nice and pleasant. Students need bright classrooms to study and modern libraries to broaden their horizons and large playgrounds to play different kinds of sports on.
The school may provide students with some special courses, such as art, tennis or piano lessons. These courses can make students relax and encourage them to develop freely. It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they get some useful experience.                                                  
I hope I can enter the school. 
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，也是提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點不夠具體,故需要考生發(fā)揮，準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
【亮點說明】Students need bright classrooms to study and modern libraries to broaden their horizons and large playgrounds to play different kinds of sports on. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語， The school may provide students with some special courses, such as art, tennis or piano lessons. 這句話用了詞組：provide sb with sth“提供某人某物”，These courses can make students relax and encourage them to develop freely. 這句話用形容詞做賓語補足語和不定式做賓語補足語，It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they get some useful experience.這句話用了it做形式主語，和so that句型。