Question

 你班將組隊(duì)參加學(xué)校組織的集體舞比賽（group dancing competition）,班長(zhǎng)希望大家積極參與。對(duì)此談?wù)勀愕目捶�。字�(jǐn)?shù)：120左右
你的文章必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
l. 你是否會(huì)參加比賽；
2. 你做出該決定的具體理由。
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Answer 1

A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.
For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。因?yàn)橹皇翘峋V，沒(méi)有具體的要點(diǎn)，要根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和疑問(wèn)詞+不定式做賓語(yǔ)，
it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying,這是一句諺語(yǔ)和倒裝句， Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.這句話是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)， it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.這是固定句型。還有 Generally speaking, First, Besides,這些關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用使文章更連貫。