Question

假如你班要以“如何為高考做準備”為題召開一次主題班會。請你根據以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談談你對高考備考過程中要注意的事項及建議：
1.保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還有增強克服困難的勇氣；
2.目標明確，正確評價自己；
3.與父母、老師或同學溝通，幫忙走出困境；
4.作息合理，飲食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。
注意：1.詞數：120 左右，開頭結尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數）；
2.參考詞匯： 明確的：definite    評價：estimation
No doubt every Senor 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination.
                                                                         
With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.

Answer 1

No doubt every Senior 3student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.
First, it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. Besides, we’d better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we’re in trouble. Finally, striking a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.
With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.

試題分析：本文的話題是如何為高考做準備，是考生較為熟悉的身邊就發(fā)生的事情，有話可說。是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
【亮點說明】這篇文章有一些高級詞匯和復雜句型：it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely.這句話使用形式主語。句中還有enable, overcome, bravely等高級詞匯。Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done.是一個很好的倒裝句式。還有文章用了first, meanwhile和Besides,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。