Question

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李明，最近從英國朋友David的來信中得知他要過十六歲生日了。
【寫作內(nèi)容】
請通過E-mail，根據(jù)下列要點用英語給他寫封祝賀信：
1. 祝賀他生日快樂；
2. 感謝他兩年來在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面給你的幫助；
3. 希望他在方便的時候來中國游玩。
參考詞匯：look forward to 期盼
【寫作要求】
1.必須使用5個句子介紹所給出的全部內(nèi)容；
2.信的格式已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入必寫句子中。
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。
Dear David,
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear David,
I'm very glad to learn that your 16th birthday is coming and I’m eager to join all your friends in wishing you a Happy birthday! It has been two years since we became good friends,and you have offered me so much help with my English study. Now I’ve made great progress in my study, so I really appreciate your help. We helped each other and shared our experience during the last two years, and I hope we’ll be good friends forever. Here I’m looking forward to your coming to China whenever it is convenient for you.
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：請通過E-mail，根據(jù)下列要點用英語給他寫封祝賀信，祝賀他的16歲生日，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，這篇文章的提綱很詳細，根據(jù)所給提綱，以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。還有題目要求必須使用5個句子介紹所給出的全部內(nèi)容；所以盡量用并列句和復(fù)雜句。
【亮點說明】 I'm very glad to learn that your 16th birthday is coming and I’m eager to join all your friends in wishing you a Happy birthday! 這句話用了并列句和wish sb in doing“祝愿某人…”，It has been two years since we became good friends,and you have offered me so much help with my English study.這句話用了It has been +一段時間+since…句型， Now I’ve made great progress in my study, so I really appreciate your help. 這句話用了結(jié)果狀語從句， Here I’m looking forward to your coming to China whenever it is convenient for you. 這句話用了動名詞做賓語和讓步狀語從句。