Question

假如你叫李華，你校同學(xué)正在就“高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉”這一主題展開討論，請根據(jù)下面所給的信息，給某英文報(bào)社寫一封信，介紹討論情況，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />

贊成(55%)	反對(45%)
1.應(yīng)該每天進(jìn)行體育鍛煉如：做早操、打乒乓球、打籃球等。	1.鍛煉浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。
2.鍛煉能增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，減少疾病。	2.鍛煉后很興奮，難以很快投入學(xué)習(xí)。
3.鍛煉能使大腦休息，使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好。	3.鍛煉使人疲勞，可能會受傷。

注意：
1．短文詞數(shù)100詞左右。
2．內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。
3．書寫須清晰、工整。
4．體育鍛煉physical exercise
                                                                                             
                                                                                            
                                                                      

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you about a heated discussion among us students in our school about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise.
55% of the students think that we should take physical exercise every day, such as doing morning exercise, playing table tennis or basketball, etc. It can build our body, keep us healthy and reduce illnesses. Meanwhile, it can make us completely relaxed for a better learning effect.
However, 45% of the students are against that. They complain that taking physical exercise is a waste of time. It can make us tired or feel too excited for further learning. More over, we may get hurt during the play. I personally think that proper physical exercise is necessary but never too hard.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

試題分析：此篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一封信來介紹班級討論情況。對于書信的格式同學(xué)們都非常熟悉，寫作時(shí)只需將要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。但是在介紹要點(diǎn)時(shí)，一定要注意語言的流暢，而且要恰當(dāng)使用連接詞以使語言連貫，上下文銜接自然。在時(shí)態(tài)方面，因?yàn)槭墙榻B人們的觀點(diǎn)，所以可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。此外，在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上可以使用三個(gè)段落來分別介紹贊成觀點(diǎn)、反對觀點(diǎn)和自己的觀點(diǎn)，這樣使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，開篇提出寫信的目的，然后兩段分別介紹對體育鍛煉的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)，這種安排使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)分明，層次清晰。文章在句式方面，既有簡練的短句，又有涵蓋內(nèi)容豐富的長句，這種長短句的結(jié)合也顯示了作者對于語言的把控力。此外文中however、moreover和meanwhile等副詞也有效地起到連接上下文的作用，使文章內(nèi)容連貫，銜接自然。