Question

目前，有些中學(xué)聘用外教承擔(dān)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)課教學(xué)。對(duì)此，你們班里的同學(xué)展開(kāi)了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹討論的情況。
　　1．有人認(rèn)為聘請(qǐng)外教的目的只是為了提高學(xué)校的知名度，并沒(méi)有什么實(shí)際意義；
　　2．有人認(rèn)為外教可以幫助學(xué)生提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣，鍛煉口語(yǔ)；
　　3．你的看法。
　　注意：1．詞數(shù)120個(gè)左右；
　　　　　2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
　　　　　3．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
　　There was a heated discussion in our class yesterday on the topic "Is it necessary to employ foreign teachers in middle schools?"________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

There was a heated discussion in our class yesterday on the topic"Is it necessary to employ foreign teachers in middle schools？"Some students believe that some schools hire foreign teachers just to improve their reputation but actually it is not necessary at all. On the contrary，there is an opinion that foreign teachers can encourage the students to get more involved in English learning，especially in improving their oral skills.
　　In my opinion，foreign teachers are very necessary because today the students' oral English ability is becoming more and more important. With foreign teachers in our school，not only can we learn English from them，but also we can make friends with them and share our experiences. What's more，we can have lots of fun by communicating with them.
　　Therefore，I believe schools can surely benefit from hiring foreign teachers.

試題分析：這是正反方的議論文，話(huà)題是中學(xué)是否聘用外教承擔(dān)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)課教學(xué)。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述；正方觀點(diǎn)和反方觀點(diǎn)以及自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語(yǔ)言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思。考生應(yīng)明白高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力�？忌鷳�(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語(yǔ)及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章觀點(diǎn)明確，條理清晰，句式富有變化：Some students believe that some schools hire foreign teachers just to improve their reputation but actually it is not necessary at all. 這句話(huà)用了賓語(yǔ)從句和不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)， there is an opinion that foreign teachers can encourage the students to get more involved in English learning，especially in improving their oral skills.這句話(huà)用了同位語(yǔ)從句， foreign teachers are very necessary because today the students' oral English ability is becoming more and more important. 這句話(huà)用了because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句， With foreign teachers in our school，not only can we learn English from them，but also we can make friends with them and share our experiences. 這句話(huà)用了with符合結(jié)構(gòu)和倒裝句，還有文章還用了On the contrary，In my opinion，What's more，這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。