Question

根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇介紹我國(guó)著名的水稻專家袁隆平的文章。
1．袁隆平, 1937年9月7日出生在重慶的一個(gè)貧困農(nóng)民家庭。
2．1953年畢業(yè)于西南農(nóng)學(xué)院，畢業(yè)后被分配到湘西農(nóng)校任教。
3．1964年開(kāi)始從事水稻研究。1981年榮獲我國(guó)第一個(gè)國(guó)家發(fā)明特等獎(jiǎng)，被國(guó)際上譽(yù)為“雜交水稻之父”。
4．生活簡(jiǎn)樸，不計(jì)名利。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)120左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

One possible version:
Yuan Longping
Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing, Yuan Longping was from a poor farmer’s family. Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he was sent to work as a teacher in the Agriculture School in the west of Hunan. He began his research in rice in 1964 and got the First National Special Prize for Invention in 1981. He is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” by the international friends. Famous as he is, he cares little for money and fame.

試題分析：這是一篇關(guān)于人物介紹的書面表達(dá)。在介紹人物生平事跡時(shí)可以采用倒敘，插敘等寫作手法以便使描敘更為生動(dòng)。因?yàn)閷懽饕�點(diǎn)有明顯的時(shí)間，所以本文也可以按照時(shí)間順序組織材料，這樣的文章顯得條理清楚，脈絡(luò)分明。在寫作時(shí)還要注意介紹過(guò)去的事情要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，陳述現(xiàn)在的情況要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。此外，在行文時(shí)還要注意連接詞的恰當(dāng)使用以便使語(yǔ)言連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文短小精悍，要點(diǎn)全面。文章使用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言全面地介紹了這位著名的水稻專家---袁隆平。文中分詞短語(yǔ)Born on September 7, 1937 in Chongqing,和 Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953,以及倒裝句Famous as he is,的使用既避免了句式的單一，又使上下文銜接更為自然，結(jié)構(gòu)更為緊湊。此外，本文按照時(shí)間的先后順序安排材料，使得文章脈絡(luò)非常清晰。