Question

據(jù)高考不到六十天的時(shí)間了，很多高考生家長都為孩子請(qǐng)來高考保姆，學(xué)校掛高考倒計(jì)時(shí)牌，每天上午、下午第一節(jié)課前，由老師帶領(lǐng)全班學(xué)生喊口號(hào)……對(duì)于家長和學(xué)校的這些做法人們褒貶不一。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上說明、寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求，為校刊“英語角”版面寫一篇短文。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．贊成者觀點(diǎn)；
2．反對(duì)者觀點(diǎn)；
3．自己的觀點(diǎn)。
寫作要求：
1．短文詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．開頭部分已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．可根據(jù)情況增減細(xì)節(jié)，詳略得當(dāng)；
4．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
參考詞匯：倒計(jì)時(shí)countdown n.
With less than 60 days before the College Entrance Examinations, ___________________________

Answer 1

One possible version
Many parents hire nurses to take care of their children, some schools put up countdown boards in the classrooms and every day before the first class in the morning or afternoon teachers shout encouraging slogans together with their students.
Some people are in favour of these measures, saying that they will keep up the students’ fighting spirits and help them achieve success in their final exams. Others think differently. They believe students can only perform their best when they are not stressful.
As a Senior 3 student, I understand why schools and parents behave the ways they do, but the more you hurry, the less progress you are likely to make. Only by being happy and confident can we eventually work miracles.

試題分析：這是一篇議論文，文章是討論很多高考生家長為孩子請(qǐng)來高考保姆，學(xué)校掛高考倒計(jì)時(shí)牌，每天上午、下午第一節(jié)課前，由老師帶領(lǐng)全班學(xué)生喊口號(hào)這一現(xiàn)象的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述；優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)的論述，以及自己觀點(diǎn)。有難度的是，這篇文章只是給了大概的框架，沒有具體的要點(diǎn)，要求在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語言多樣化；自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力�？忌鷳�(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Some people are in favour of these measures, saying that they will keep up the students’ fighting spirits and help them achieve success in their final exams. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， They believe students can only perform their best when they are not stressful.這句話有賓語從句和狀語從句， As a Senior 3 student, I understand why schools and parents behave the ways they do,這句話里面是有定語從句， but the more you hurry, the less progress you are likely to make.這句話用了the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)…的句型， Only by being happy and confident can we eventually work miracles.這句話用的是倒裝句。