Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你的一個好朋友Linda 現(xiàn)在正感到生活不快樂，不健康，有壓力，可又不知道如何改變自己的生活方式，于是寫信給你，請求給她提些建議。
下面是你提的幾點建議，請你按照以下內(nèi)容給Linda回一封信（約100詞左右）
1．要有足夠的睡眠，至少8小時，這樣才能精力充沛（energetic）、學(xué)習(xí)積極（active）。
2．多鍛煉是非常重要的3．多吃水果和蔬菜，禁止吃垃圾食品(junk food)。
4．學(xué)習(xí)之余聽聽音樂可以減輕壓力。
5．盡 可能地微笑，它會幫助你快樂、忘記煩惱。
Dear Linda ，
If you want to be healthy and happy，you need to have a healthy lifestyle. I am writing to。。。。。
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Linda,
If you want to be healthy and happy , you need to have a healthy lifestyle . I am writing to give you some advice and I hope you can follow it .
As a young student , first , you need to get enough sleep , so you need to try to go to bed earlier every night .You should try to sleep for at least 8 hours every day , which will help you to be active and energetic at school. Second, doing more exercise is also very important .Besides , you should remember to eat more fruit and vegetables and mustn’t eat junk food. What’s more , it can reduce your stress to listen to music sometimes after studying .Last but not least , smiling as often as possible can help you stay happy and forget your trouble .
Hope my advice can be helpful to you .Good luck to you .
Your
LiHua

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一封書信，就如何過的健康快樂而給朋友一些建議。書信是一種大家都熟悉的體裁，而且內(nèi)容也貼近生活，學(xué)生們不會感到無話可說。本文中涉及到的要點較多，所以在敘述的時候不僅要注意要點的全面，而且要注意語言的邏輯性，要恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍┻B接詞以使文章內(nèi)容連貫，條理清晰。此外，文章內(nèi)容是關(guān)于建議的，所以要注意一些建議的表達(dá)方法。
【亮點說明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點全面，條理清晰。在文中作者用表順序的連接詞first、second以及表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的插入語besides、what’s more和last but not the least等把五個要點一一呈現(xiàn)出來，這樣不僅使文章內(nèi)容連貫，而且顯得結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，條理分明，這是文章的最大亮點。此外文章語言簡練流暢，不拖泥帶水，也使得這些建議具有了更強(qiáng)的可取性。