Question

最近，“光盤行動”在社會上引起很大反響。請你在班上演講，闡述學(xué)習(xí)食堂食物浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)
象嚴(yán)重，號召大家加入“光盤行動”。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇演講稿:
1. 列舉學(xué)校餐廳食物浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象；
2.闡述浪費(fèi)食物的危害：不利于性格發(fā)展，增加父母經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)，浪費(fèi)資源；
注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120  2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
3. 提出減少食物浪費(fèi)的措施（至少兩點(diǎn)）
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Answer 1

Dear friends,
May I have your attention, please? Now I’d like to share my opinion about food waste.
There is no denying that food waste has become a serious problem on campus. We can see some students dumping leftovers without feeling guilty.So it is high time to call for an end to it.
The reasons are as follows. In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad influence on our own character building. Secondly, it adds financial burden of our parent.Last but not least, not only does it exhaust the world’s limited natural resources, it can also contribute to global warming.
In my opinion, it is everyone’s business to fight with it. One one hand, we should start it with ourselves to save food, for instance, do not order too much, pack up the leftovers, don’t be picky about food. On the other hand, we can persuade others to join the fight with us.
Tough and big as the task is, I’m sure, with ever everyone doing his bit. We will change thepresent situation for the better.
That’s all.Thank you .

試題分析：這是一篇演講稿稿，所以在語言的使用上要大眾化，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。話題是光盤行動。列舉學(xué)校餐廳食物浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象；.闡述浪費(fèi)食物的危害。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡略,故需要充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容，需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句子串聯(lián)起來，使文章更加連貫。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】There is no denying that food waste has become a serious problem on campus. 這句話用了固定句型：There is no denying that ….，We can see some students dumping leftovers without feeling guilty. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做賓語補(bǔ)足語，So it is high time to call for an end to it.這句話是用了it is high time to do句型， not only does it exhaust the world’s limited natural resources,it can also contribute to global warming.這句話用了not only的倒裝句， it is everyone’s business to fight with it. 這句話用了it做形式主語， Tough and big as the task is, I’m sure, with ever everyone doing his bit. 這句話用了as的倒裝句，還有文章還用了 In the first place, Secondly, Last but not least, One one hand, On the other hand,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。