Question

隨著微博的普及，許多行業(yè)精英或公眾人物通過(guò)微博發(fā)布消息和表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)，給社會(huì)帶來(lái)不同影響�，F(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)就此寫(xiě)篇簡(jiǎn)評(píng)，內(nèi)容包括： 
1. 上述情況日趨普遍；
2. 這種做法的利與弊； 
3. 微博是否應(yīng)受到監(jiān)管？為什么？
注意: 1. 文章標(biāo)題已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)算在總字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)。
2. 字?jǐn)?shù): 120字左右； 
3. 參考詞匯: 微博 micro-blogs n (pl.)    行業(yè)精英 industry elites n. (pl)
Micro-blogs, a new form of communication, are becoming more and more popular. ___________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Micro-blogs, a new format of communication, are becoming more and more popular. Many industry elites or public figures post news or express ideas through micro-blogs, which has produced different impacts on society. Generally speaking, most of them use micro-blogs to convey positive messages to the public. For  example, they encourage people to help those who badly need help. However, some of them behave differently. Sometimes their micro-blogs are full of dirty words, gossip or rumors, which has a bad effect on the people around them. Therefore, any improper message posted there should be deleted by the website operators and that’s their duty, I think, for micro-blogs are just like a real world, where everybody should obey the laws and the moral codes, and no absolute freedom should exist there at all。Only in this way can people tell right from wrong without misled

試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫(xiě)作，用英語(yǔ)就微博的日益流行寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)評(píng)，內(nèi)容包括：1. 上述情況日趨普遍； 2. 這種做法的利與弊；  3. 微博是否應(yīng)受到監(jiān)管？為什么？文章使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子給文章增色，如Many industry elites or public figures post news or express ideas through micro-blogs, which has produced different impacts on society(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)，Generally speaking一般說(shuō)來(lái)，F(xiàn)or  example,例如并且主語(yǔ)了句子的銜接如：however ，therefore 等。