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—個(gè)英文網(wǎng)站面向中學(xué)生征稿請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)稿件，介紹“中秋節(jié)”及這個(gè)節(jié)日里的主要活動(dòng)。
1. 寫作要點(diǎn)：它是中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；
2. 家人團(tuán)聚；
3. 賞月、吃月餅；
4. 還有旅游、訪友等其他活動(dòng)。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：中秋節(jié) the Mid-Autumn Festival 農(nóng)歷 lunar calendar
賞月 enjoy the full moon         月餅 moon cake
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.________________________________                        _
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The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home to attend the celebration. The moon that might looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to the traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends.

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文。寫作時(shí)首先要仔細(xì)審題，確定人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，文體。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全面，上下段要使用連接詞做到連貫。我們?cè)趯懽髦袘?yīng)當(dāng)用盡可能少的形式表達(dá)盡可能多的語(yǔ)義內(nèi)容，力求簡(jiǎn)潔精練。根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，寫出所列要點(diǎn)，要全面。我們?cè)谟迷~上應(yīng)該仔細(xì)揣摩，準(zhǔn)確清晰地表達(dá)我們的思想，剔除冗詞贅語(yǔ)，使文章言簡(jiǎn)意賅。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如：no matter how far away or how busy we are, As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. 等。還運(yùn)用了主語(yǔ)從句What we love most，和定語(yǔ)從句the time we enjoy the full moon together. 等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Usually,With the beautiful moon up in the sky,  In addition to等。