Question

Mary是一位美國(guó)女學(xué)生，去年來到你校。你跟她相處很好，不久便成了朋友。Mary對(duì)漢語有濃厚的興趣，漢語講得好；她擅長(zhǎng)數(shù)學(xué)，勤于作業(yè)；化學(xué)課上喜歡做實(shí)驗(yàn)，但有時(shí)粗心大意；物理是她最喜歡的學(xué)科之一，成績(jī)優(yōu)秀；她樂于助人，大家都非常喜歡她。
請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇以A friend of mine為題的短文，要求100詞左右。
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Answer 1

A Friend of Mine
Mary, who is a girl with good manners, came to our school last year. She is always ready to help others and therefore gets along very well with everyone else in her class, and we have made friends with each other.
Having a special interest in Chinese, Mary speaks the language very well. She does plenty of math exercises every day and is very good at the subject. She enjoys doing experiments in Chemistry, though sometimes she needs to be more careful. Physics is her favorite subject and she is one of the best students in this subject and her physics teacher is proud of her.
We love her very much.

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文出現(xiàn)很多常見的詞組：Be ready to 樂于做…，gets along very well with 和…相處，made friends with 和…交朋友，be proud of 以…為榮，還有使用了一些句型：Mary, who is a girl with good manners, came to our school last year. 這句話用了定語從句， Having a special interest in Chinese, Mary speaks the language very well. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， She enjoys doing experiments in Chemistry, though sometimes she needs to be more careful. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句。