Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
If you like to break things when you are unhappy, the Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School is the school for you. This term, Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School will build a "stress wall" to help students who feel unhappy because of schoolwork or for other reasons.
Tao Dehua, a leader at the school said the idea of a stress wall started when footprints were found on some newly painted walls and some school windows were broken.
"These things happen because some students feel lots of pressure from their studies or because they don't get along well with other students. When under stress, the body get ready to either run or fight and becomes very nervous. Hitting the wall can help relax the body and take away stress," Tao said.
"Tests and homework make me Sad," said Lu Yan, a junior girl. “I can't wait to hit the wall. It will help me a lot with my problems." 
Another girl student who wouldn't give her name said that the wall won't help. “Mainly because it can't talk," she said. "I need to talk to someone when I'm sad."
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1、以約30個詞概括這段短文內(nèi)容；
2、然后以約120個詞就“Should the stress wall be built"這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括以下要點：
(1) 學(xué)生的壓力來源；
(2) 是否該建此墻；
(3) 提供一些其他有效的減壓方法。
【寫作要求】
l、可以參照閱讀材料但不得直接引用原文的句子；
2、作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 

Answer 1

1、The passage conveys to us that in order to help students with stress, the Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School built a “stress wall” for students to relax, towards which students have different opinions.
2、One possible version:
Nowadays, students are under great pressure, which mainly comes from their peers, parents as well as school work. There is no doubt that as the competing for better academic work and future is getting fiercer and fiercer, students feel more and more pressure.
As far as I am concerned, building a stress wall, which the students can hit, is not appropriate. For one thing, as the saying goes, violence is not the solution to problems, which means that even if students punch the wall heavily, the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out. For another, this may lead students to solve a problem with violence, causing more trouble.           
People have different ways of relieving stress in order to live happy and healthy lives. Some people prefer to engage in physical exercise by taking part in outdoor activities or playing sports, while some feel more relaxed listening to music or even after a good sleep. As for me, I find that the best way to reduce stress is to spend time with my family or friends. In addiction, some interest clubs such as music, dance, are also good places that offer comfort to students.

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