Question

照片展現(xiàn)了志愿者活動(dòng)的一個(gè)情景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文：

1．簡(jiǎn)述照片內(nèi)容；
2．談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?br />3．說(shuō)說(shuō)你能做什么。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人總詞。
2．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
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Volunteers help our society in many ways．They devote their time and effort to help people in need．­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­
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Answer 1

Volunteers help our society in many ways.They devote their time and effort to help people in need.
The picture above illustrates a scene that can be seen in our life, where volunteers went to look after the old people. They send them not only the things the old need but also their love to those who need care most.
Seeing this picture, I think of the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of orphans who need better care. It is everyone’s responsibility to help them realize that there are people who care about them.
Like the volunteers in the picture, I also have a willing heart to help people. I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖說(shuō)話(huà)類(lèi)作文。右邊的照片展現(xiàn)了志愿者活動(dòng)的一個(gè)情景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文：1．簡(jiǎn)述照片內(nèi)容；2．談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?．說(shuō)說(shuō)你能做什么。首先要看懂圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，準(zhǔn)確描述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要談?wù)勛约旱母邢�。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】The picture above illustrates a scene that can be seen in our life, where volunteers went to look after the old people.這里含有兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句；They send them not only the things the old need but also their love to those who need care most.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句；Seeing this picture, I think of the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of orphans who need better care. 這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。