Question

假設你班要出一期關于“A Great Man”的英語墻報，請根據以下提示用英語寫一篇關于“Nelson Mandela”的短文，刊登在此墻報上。

簡介	1918年出生在南非；1943年加入ANC，領導黑人進行爭取平等和自由的反種族歧視斗爭；曾蹲監(jiān)獄27年；1993年獲諾貝爾和平獎；1994年被選為第一位黑人總統；2013年因癌癥去世。
個人評價	......

注意：
短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
考生可適當發(fā)揮，使文章內容充實、連貫；
詞數：120左右。
參考詞匯：anti-racial discrimination 反種族歧視
Nelson Mandela
Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people.     
                                                                         

Answer 1

Nelson Mandela
Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people. He was born in South Africa in 1918 and joined the ANC in 1943. He led the black people in the campaign of the anti-racial discrimination for freedom and equality. As a result, he was in prison for 27 years. In 1993, he won the Nobel Peace Prize for his contribution. Highly respected by his people, he was elected the first black president of South Africa. Unfortunately, our beloved leader died of cancer in 2013.
For all his life, Nelson Mandela had striven for the liberation of African nations. He, who played an important role in the anti-racial discrimination struggle in South Africa, made great contributions to the development of Chian-South Africa relations. Although the great man has left, Mandela’s thought and his spirit will live forever.
He is the pride of the African people as well as the world.

試題分析：本書面表達是一篇人物介紹類寫作。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面。對于中學作文的寫作，盡量將所學的知識運用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結構緊湊的文章，不要出現中式英文。在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如in prison，die of，play an important role in，make great contributions to, as well as；還運用句型who引導的非限定性定語從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：As a result，Although，and 等等。