Question

現(xiàn)在，很多中學(xué)生每天長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用耳機(jī)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、學(xué)英語(yǔ)。你的英語(yǔ)筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來(lái)信中提到感覺(jué)頭痛、注意力不集中、記憶力減退。請(qǐng)你就此回信談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和建議。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．簡(jiǎn)述過(guò)度使用耳機(jī)的現(xiàn)象；
2．分析過(guò)度使用耳機(jī)的危害；（至少兩點(diǎn)）
3．提出你的建議。(至少兩條)
注意：
1．要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．可能用到的詞匯：耳機(jī)earphone
Dear Li Ping,
I received your letter yesterday...
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Lin Tao

Answer 1

I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones.
As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing.
There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,                                                                 Lin Tao

試題分析：這是一篇話(huà)題類(lèi)作文�，F(xiàn)在，很多中學(xué)生每天長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用耳機(jī)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、學(xué)英語(yǔ)。你的英語(yǔ)筆友李平也是如此。最近他在來(lái)信中提到感覺(jué)頭痛、注意力不集中、記憶力減退。請(qǐng)你就此回信談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)和建議。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可，尤其注意一定要寫(xiě)出自己的建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study.是動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)。There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English.包含一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。