Question

我校一年一度的“校園文化藝術(shù)節(jié)”將在12月份舉行。最近我班同學(xué)就高二學(xué)生是否要參加校園文化藝術(shù)節(jié)有不同看法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示用英語寫一篇短文，介紹相關(guān)情況并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。
大部分同學(xué)贊成：
因?qū)W習(xí)緊張，壓力大，校園文化藝術(shù)節(jié)可以豐富課余生活，緩解學(xué)習(xí)壓力；
可以加深同學(xué)之間的了解，同時(shí)培養(yǎng)我們學(xué)生的各個(gè)方面的能力；
可以展示自我，贏得尊重。
少部分同學(xué)反對(duì)：
排練浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，也浪費(fèi)金錢；藝術(shù)節(jié)時(shí)間跨度長(zhǎng)達(dá)一個(gè)月，影響學(xué)業(yè)；
有些同學(xué)太專注活動(dòng)，學(xué)習(xí)的精力分散了；
節(jié)日期間，有些同學(xué)穿著、行為不符合中學(xué)生標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。
你的觀點(diǎn)：……
注意：
文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出；
字?jǐn)?shù)150字左右（不包括已給的起始句）
參考詞匯：豐富: enrich (v.), 緩解: relieve (v.), 排練: rehearse (v.)
Some of us Senior Two students have held a discussion about whether it is necessary to take part in the coming “Campus Culture & Art Festival” in December.
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Answer 1

 
Some of us Senior Two students have held a discussion about whether it is necessary to take part in the coming “Campus Culture & Art Festival” in December.
The majority are in favor of the activity where they can relieve some study pressure from their parents, teachers and themselves. Not only can the festival make the school life colorful, but in it they can know more about each other. At the same time, some students can develop more interest and improve their abilities. What’s more, some can display themselves and earn respect.
However, a small part of them hold a different view. Firstly, they think that it will take them a lot of time to rehearse, which lasts nearly a whole month and affects their academic study. And the festival will cost them money. Secondly, some are too devoted to activities to concentrate on studies. Last but not least, some even dress and behave strangely, which is obviously against the school rules.
Personally, I think it is good to participate in the festival. I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed in activities. But we should try to, with less money, attract more students to join in the festival.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。我校一年一度的“校園文化藝術(shù)節(jié)”將在12月份舉行。最近我班同學(xué)就高二學(xué)生是否要參加校園文化藝術(shù)節(jié)有不同看法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示用英語寫一篇短文，介紹相關(guān)情況并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可，尤其注意一定要寫出自己的看法。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。注意要求的詞數(shù)150字左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Some of us Senior Two students have held a discussion about whether it is necessary to take part in the coming “Campus Culture & Art Festival” in December.這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句；The majority are in favor of the activity where they can relieve some study pressure from their parents, teachers and themselves.這里含有一個(gè)定語從句。Firstly, they think that it will take them a lot of time to rehearse, which lasts nearly a whole month and affects their academic study.這里含有一個(gè)非限制性定語從句。